First story read for my gang bang challenge. This was a lot of fun, I liked the MC and how freaking dense and moronic his fiance could be. I loved loved the fallout, cause I'm a jerk and that's always my favorite part. The time period was an awesome choice, I really enjoyed it. Would be fun to see more stories in this verse, with some of the others we met or an all new set.
Overall, a great read :)